A knock sounded on the door. Everly's mom, Minty Tree, answered the door. A purple unicorn wearing an excessive amount of winter clothing stood before her.
"Greetings, Ma'am, may I come in?" he asked
"Of course, come right in, it's freezing outside!" she responded, stepping aside to let the unicorn in.
She helped him remove the thick, winter gear and asked him, "What brings you to our home at this time of night?"
"I'm a doctor that was called to the village to help treat seriously ill ponies. While I was staying at the town, I couldn't help but hear about your daughter who lost her eyesight to an accident with ice in a blizzard."
They moved to the living room to continue talking. Everly and her father, Fir Snow joined them.
"I'm Doctor Curehoof, I have created a large assortment of potions that have cured many ailments for many ponies. After hearing about Everly's blindness, I came to see you because I believe I can help her get her vision back, maybe even completely." he explained to the 3 ponies.
They were shocked, "You mean you can CURE her blindness?" Fir Snow exclaimed.
"Yes sir, with a combination of spells and a potion or two, I can bring back her eyesight." he responded.
Everly couldn't believe what she was hearing, she had a chance to be able to see again. She began to tear up, as her mother was.
This was the miracle she had been hoping for.
This was kinda rushed but I hope it still looks good ;a;
I didn't have the time to put in all the details I desired but I tried to fit in some good ones.
What do you think?
How many parts do you think should be in this series?
I might post part 2 tomorrow, I may not, I have freshmen orientation ;A;
Part 1: You're here
Part 2: Coming soon!